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Penname: thruholewizard [Contact] Real name: Stephen
Member Since: 23 Sep 2014
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Akira became Ayane, or how my best friend (and once girlfriend) became a werewoman by The Silver King Rated: Mature Audiences - Explicit (Age 18+) (MA) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 52]
Summary:

Written from Kage Ryū, roommate of Sen Akira (Sen Ayane). Akira has been an okama since moving to Tokyo Prefecture when he was eight. Adopting the name Ayane (Colourful Sound) he donned a dress and pink twin tails and passed without anyone ever noticing. Then Kage Ryū, a transfer from Kyoto, came to the school. He was made fun of because of his Kansai accent and different manners than his Tokyo classmates, so Akira came to his aid, becoming a sort of bodyguard. Then, while still own as Ayane, Akira and Ryū began dating a month into junior high, and continued until Akira's sixteenth birthday, when Ryū found out the truth. The relationship reverted to best friends, and they moved in together, maintaining a semblance of dating while, in reality, acting like best friends. Then, after Akira came home from an okama bar late one evening, it set out a cascade of events that eventually involved Ryū.



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  1. Chapter 1 - [Reviews - 25] - (877 words)
  2. Chapter 2 - [Reviews - 8] - (922 words)
  3. Chapter 3 - [Reviews - 6] - (1211 words)
  4. Chapter 4 - [Reviews - 10] - (110 words)

Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Age Group: Adult 26-55
Categories: Magical Transformations
Genre: Romance
Keywords: None
Story Universe: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3120 Read Count: 57658 ePub Downloads: 6577
[ Download ePub ] [Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2013 Updated: 25 Jan 2014
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Date: 11 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

 


the suspence mounts ,I hope for a happy ending . Don't let me down .

Reviewer: thruholewizard Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

 


oh no !!!!! post more do not let the suspence kill me .....


 


 


Stephen J

The Hand We're Dealt by Chii Rated: Teen Audiences (Age 13+) (T) starstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
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when life deals you a wild card its up to you how you play it

 



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[ Download ePub ] [Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 25 Jan 2014
Reviewer: thruholewizard Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 1: prologue-where do I start

ok You have my interest write more LOTS more and let us see how this turns out

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Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 1: prologue-where do I start

finish this please

Reviewer: thruholewizard Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: prologue-where do I start

 


Too short for a good begining although it was enough to whet my apetite ,please hurry to post more .

I had an interesting job - part 4 by deborah karen Rated: Mature Audiences - Explicit (Age 18+) (MA) starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 92]
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The continued adventures of Ian as he embarks on yet another impersonation to help out his friends at work. Ian's become quite practiced at being a girl these days and it seems as if he's really enjoying his job!



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[ Download ePub ] [Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2014 Updated: 19 Mar 2014
Reviewer: thruholewizard Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

yes write more !!!!

A World of Elvish Wonder by ElvishWarrior Rated: Mature Audiences - Explicit (Age 18+) (MA) starstarstarstar [Reviews - 159]
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A story about a less than popular teenage boy who is thrust into a world of magic, mayhem and fantasy creatures. He gets transformed into an elf and dropped into this new world with nothing but his two friends and a new gender to explore. With enough support I am hoping to turn this into a long story with atleast 100,000 words perhaps as many as 300,000 or even more.



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Table of Contents:
  1. Dropped on my bottom - [Reviews - 118] - (490 words)
  2. A look back.. - [Reviews - 12] - (693 words)
  3. Exploring - [Reviews - 5] - (2757 words)
  4. A brief history of magic - [Reviews - 7] - (1738 words)
  5. An imaginative victory - [Reviews - 17] - (4845 words)

Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Age Group: Teen to College Age AP
Categories: Age Progression, Magical Transformations, Stuck
Genre: Action, Adventure, Fantasy
Keywords: Corsets
Story Universe: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10523 Read Count: 41382 ePub Downloads: 6635
[ Download ePub ] [Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2014 Updated: 05 Jun 2014
Reviewer: thruholewizard Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30 May 2016 Title: Chapter 4: A brief history of magic

I have been enjoying the story far too much to be overly critical.I suppose you could spend more time on being descriptive ,though it has been ok so far it could be better

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Date: 30 May 2016 Title: Chapter 5: An imaginative victory

Please write more I was so enjoying the read .the story has such a good start I do hope you write more 

Reviewer: thruholewizard Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 4: A brief history of magic

I would rate it higher if I could

Stephen J

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Date: 07 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Dropped on my bottom

slow start could be more descriptive ,hope we learn more about Eli and what could have precipatated him finding himself in a new body


sjhallahan
rereading because it was so good first time

Reviewer: thruholewizard Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 2: A look back..

thanks for the background on Eli and at least descriptions of his friends it helps me imagine who he is much better ...

Stephen J

Reviewer: thruholewizard Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 5: An imaginative victory

come on . how long do we have to wait for the rest of the story ???

I have read and re read the story so far  and it is a great start  so please  POST SOME MORE .

Stephen J 

Damsefly by Erin Halfelven Rated: Mature Audiences (Age 16+) (M) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Darryl loved superheroes, so when Uncle Steve offered him a magic ring....



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[ Download ePub ] [Report This] Published: 16 Sep 2014 Updated: 16 Sep 2014
Reviewer: thruholewizard Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1 - Introducing...

great story so far .where is the rest ???
I would love to read more .

Stephen J

She Has A Way About Her by johnnail Rated: Mature Audiences (Age 16+) (M) starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 16]
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A man who has taken pride in being single through match making he find the lady of his dreams who is not female genetically.



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[ Download ePub ] [Report This] Published: 16 Jan 2015 Updated: 22 Jul 2015
Reviewer: thruholewizard Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

where is the rest of the story?it was off to such a good start . I was hoping there was more .

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Date: 05 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

well it is a good start why did you end it there?

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