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Reviewer: TZMaverick Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2008 - 05:47 am Title: Chapter 17

Ah Shoot!

I can understanf the last 2 chapters but IMHO it would be a better ending with Toni's prediction of a 1-2 finish at Indy being the end. Or even adding another couple chapters with Toni marrying the 2 'other' women as well.

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