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Reviewer: thruholewizard Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2016 - 01:44 am Title: Chapter 1

too quick, too vague, it was a fun read and could be a great story if developed a little more and was finished ....

Stephen J

Reviewer: sindi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2009 - 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

great !

Reviewer: JennyLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2009 - 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well done.  I think perhaps that the new girl coulold become an attendant of some sort in the house.  since she has no recollection of her past she could beleive she had always worked for the women.

Reviewer: Zephyrus Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2009 - 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awesome story. I love how you describe the transformation, in this story and your previous, "Breakdown". Very vivid and sexy. You're my kind of author.  :)

Look forward to seeing more.


- Zeph

Reviewer: Jezzi Belle Stewart Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2009 - 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

I hate it when the bad girls win.  Where's Dorothy when she's needed ... and give her a fire hose this time instead of just a bucket.

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