Date: 15 Jun 2009 - 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 01 Jun 2009 - 06:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Sweet story . it could have been a little longer. yet it was very nice as it is .
Sweet Dreams and keep up the great work luv
Akiko Mye Kato
Date: 10 Apr 2009 - 12:19 am Title: Chapter 1
I stopped reading when he just gave in an accepted being Rita without a fight. I wish he had put up a fight. If he had left the house. he might have stayed a girl, but the sleep deal wouldn't have been in effect and he wouldn't get old and fat - except in the normal passage of time, and then only the old was a given.