[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2016 - 10:59 am Title: 3 - Consequences
finally !
I am just loving it
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2016 - 08:58 am Title: 2 - Revelations
A wonderful story so far .I am having a wonderful time reading it .
I love a good sentimental story ,and this one rocks.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2016 - 06:37 am Title: 1 - Accident
We are off to a good start . I like your style. I am enjoying my self and want to get back to the story so I will be very brief .Good job nice story .
Stephen J
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2010 - 03:33 am Title: 4 - Excursions
A very sweet story :)
And true, it should be a even relationship. But mostly i expect all good relations to be 'give and take'. It's a very well written tale and I'm pleased to heve read it. Thanks.
And now for the critique :)
At times a little long, although i rally enjoyed the way you gave both perspectives :)
But very nice with a true 'flow' to it.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2009 - 09:12 pm Title: 4 - Excursions
That was beautiful! I would love to see this story blossom into a novella or even a full-length novel.
Date: 21 Mar 2009 - 10:15 pm Title: 4 - Excursions
This story was a real gem,I kept thinking of a story I read years ago by H E Bates called triple echo a much darker tale,but the writing was that good.I look forward to reading more of your work.
Date: 05 Mar 2009 - 01:24 am Title: 4 - Excursions
What an exceptionally sweet love story! Bravo!
(I hope Lynn gets the receptionist job.)
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2009 - 11:31 pm Title: 4 - Excursions
One of the best stories I have read on the four major sites and than some, thank you for sharing this.