[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2009 - 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
Short but good chapter. I can't wait for more!
P/kaf
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[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2009 - 11:12 am Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely adore this storyline, and hope that you will continue it -- soon!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2009 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like the way the story is written and the way the plot is heading so far. Just before Jack comes on the ice, it appears a part is missing.....maybe it was cut off in the posting?..
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2009 - 11:23 am Title: Chapter 1
So glad to see you back Amanda it has been a long time and I love your stories, especially the fun and innocence. Don't worry we aer ready for more details if they fit the story or just for fun. Sounds like a good start, there is more right hun?
Hugs, Kristi
Date: 03 Jan 2009 - 11:34 am Title: Chapter 1
New Stories!!, I enjoyed your stories on Crystal's Story Site. Both of these stories look like fun, thou I think I will enjou this one just a bit more.
Date: 03 Jan 2009 - 10:13 am Title: Chapter 1
Good story.
Doesn't your English teachr believe in quotation marks around dialog? Try it; it makes reading a bit easier.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2009 - 02:28 am Title: Chapter 1
interesting story premise. I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment.
I wonder if it was REALLY the rink that changed the order, or if the girls thought this up ahead of time... Since the nametag had already said Bobbie and all...
My only issue with this story is that it could use a bit of editing, and proper punctuation and such.
But a good story none the less.
-HuGgLeS-
-P/KAF