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[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2014 - 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
I came across this story just today - Feb 2014.
I don't understand the reviews left late in 2012 but I do understand a story that was developing nicely and am wondering if there has been any further story written. Quite sad if there hasn't been.
Like the previous reveiwers, I look forward to further developments.
There have been a few typos and occasions when I feel there was something missing but they are mechanical issues. The storyline is great.
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2014 - 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
I came across this story just today - Feb 2014.
I don't understand the reviews left late in 2012 but I do understand a story that was developing nicely and am wondering if there has been any further story written. Quite sad if there hasn't been.
Like the previous reveiwers, I look forward to further developments.
There have been a few typos and occasions when I feel there was something missing but they are mechanical issues. The storyline is great.
Date: 09 Oct 2012 - 03:22 am Title: Chapter 1
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Date: 09 Oct 2012 - 01:46 am Title: Chapter 1
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[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2011 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really very interesting
Date: 05 Aug 2009 - 05:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Sorry just too busy to get on with it.
I will honest :-)
Date: 02 Aug 2009 - 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Did you give up on this or just get busy? It was going so well!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2009 - 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm wondering what's missing from this paragraph, between "still aware of" and "He wondered how":
> Bob was going to reply but thought better of it. He had to admit he liked the freedom of movement this clothing allowed and had now warmed up so despite the skimpy clothing he was able to start attempting more complicated moves, well complicated for him anyway. He was still aware of He wondered how it would feel without the legwarmers and cardy?
Does this part need updating?
With warm regard,
Deni
Date: 13 Apr 2009 - 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Amanda! Such a great writer, I love your stories. Was very pleased to see you active again. Lakeland Visit is one of my all-time favorites, as is Well, It Was My Idea. Please continue these latest story threads!
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2009 - 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this story, I'm waiting with baited breath for teh next installment.
Date: 11 Feb 2009 - 08:26 am Title: Chapter 1
This'd be a great move into a workplace piece!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2009 - 11:12 am Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely adore this storyline, and hope that you will continue it -- soon!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2009 - 11:23 am Title: Chapter 1
So glad to see you back Amanda it has been a long time and I love your stories, especially the fun and innocence. Don't worry we aer ready for more details if they fit the story or just for fun. Sounds like a good start, there is more right hun?
Hugs, Kristi
Date: 03 Jan 2009 - 11:34 am Title: Chapter 1
New Stories!!, I enjoyed your stories on Crystal's Story Site. Both of these stories look like fun, thou I think I will enjou this one just a bit more.
Date: 03 Jan 2009 - 10:13 am Title: Chapter 1
Good story.
Doesn't your English teachr believe in quotation marks around dialog? Try it; it makes reading a bit easier.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2009 - 02:28 am Title: Chapter 1
interesting story premise. I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment.
I wonder if it was REALLY the rink that changed the order, or if the girls thought this up ahead of time... Since the nametag had already said Bobbie and all...
My only issue with this story is that it could use a bit of editing, and proper punctuation and such.
But a good story none the less.
-HuGgLeS-
-P/KAF