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Reviewer: thruholewizard Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 - 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 5

I really loved it .I loved the happy ending .I would love to see you write more like this . Watch your grammar and spelling .

Stephen J


Reviewer: thruholewizard Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 - 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 5

I really loved it .I loved the happy ending .I would love to see you write more like this . Watch your grammar and spelling .

Stephen J


Reviewer: Maryjane Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 - 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 5

I really didn't expect this type of an ending, it makes me think this wasn't just a story, but a real life experience.


Reviewer: Maryjane Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 - 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 4

This is really really messed up,


Reviewer: Maryjane Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 - 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 3

I don't know what to say, something is missing,
what can it be? Tell us more.


Reviewer: Maryjane Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 - 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 2

Quite a tail, interesting,but too deep into this girl thing.getting a little hooked, long way back maybe
Won't make it!


Reviewer: Maryjane Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 - 11:26 am Title: Part 1. Day 1. When Beth Helped

For the first time, you write like a pro! Don't just leave us hanging like that, write more.


Reviewer: Renee Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2013 - 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 5

Great story Figured when Jess started flerting & the way Betha acted around Jess I fugured that Beth finaly figured out that she was a Lesbian & loved Jess WAY more that James & the way James always felt more comftorable as Jess & after the first time she was dressed fully as a girl how her manerisms changer like a switch & instantly became a girl voice & all that the longer Jess was aroud James was loosing moe & more ground then she relized that she WANTED to be Jess for the rest of her life.

Love this story Love to see how Jess & Beth get along & how School treats Jess latter when she starts going to school as Jess

(I'm not familure with UK school system is sith form the highest grade there is before college?)


Reviewer: AnnaBee Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2012 - 09:44 am Title: Part 1. Day 1. When Beth Helped

Really enjoyed this story and do hope there will be a Part 2, 3, 4........


The concept of both sister and girlfriend teaming up together for the (slightly) forced feminisation was lovely and I did enjoy your descriptions of Jess getting dressed with Beth.


And Dianelisalc - I am very jealous of your Homecoming Week. I think people might have been suspecting after a whole week dressed :)


Reviewer: Renee Heart Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2012 - 05:00 pm Title: Part 1. Day 1. When Beth Helped

Great start for a U.K. Story,

I think Jess was always there just berried deep down inside. I hope she enjoys things so much she will never go back to a boy!


Reviewer: dianelisalc Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2012 - 07:41 am Title: Part 1. Day 1. When Beth Helped

Great story, truly brings back fond memories of the Catholic school I went to, I was voted to be on Homecoming by my class for a Powder Purf Football game. And wore my gf's school uniform the whole week of Homecoming, and her Homecoming Queen outfit for the pep rally, the Tea for all the Homecoming Maids, and the game. Even went to Homecoming dance in her outfit, can't describe how wonderful it was. Look forward to ur next episode, lots of potential.


Reviewer: dianelisalc Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2012 - 07:37 am Title: Part 1. Day 1. When Beth Helped

Great story, truly brings back fond memories of the Catholic school I went to, I was voted to be on Homecoming by my class for a Powder Purf Football game. And wore my gf's school uniform the whole week of Homecoming, and her Homecoming Queen outfit for the pep rally, the Tea for all the Homecoming Maids, and the game. Even went to Homecoming dance in her outfit, can't describe how wonderful it was. Look forward to ur next episode, lots of potential.


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