Date: 12 Feb 2012 - 12:26 am Title: Chapter 1 - Jame’s Birthday
Im currently in the middle of writting the next chapter, I kinda lost my muse for this story but shes slowly comin g back to me :) I'm hoping to get this done soon :) Thank you guys for liking it :)
Date: 12 Feb 2011 - 01:02 am Title: Chapter 1 - Jame’s Birthday
Very good start. You left the story many ways to proceed.
Date: 11 Feb 2011 - 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Jame’s Birthday
Thank you, Ill make sure the next chapter is longer, and Ill use a wp instead of google docs :)
I meant for this chapter to be alittle short, it was more of a teaser and a test to see if I could do it
Date: 11 Feb 2011 - 07:19 am Title: Chapter 1 - Jame’s Birthday
This is a cute story, but this chapter could have been longer. There are also a few grammar errors and misspeallings. You need to review this story and use a dictionary if you have to. There are famous authors that use the dictionary to make sure a word is spelled properly.