Reviews For Alandira’s Song
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Reviewer: wq123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2017 - 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Jame’s Birthday

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Reviewer: Renee Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2012 - 09:56 am Title: Chapter 1 - Jame’s Birthday

Well It's almost perfict Ashly I see thing I could have said diffrently but defently a great story :) glad to help out & ty for letting me.


Reviewer: Darkkitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 - 12:26 am Title: Chapter 1 - Jame’s Birthday

Im currently in the middle of writting the next chapter, I kinda lost my muse for this story but shes slowly comin g back to me :) I'm hoping to get this done soon :) Thank you guys for liking it :)


Reviewer: stacy Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 - 07:59 am Title: Chapter 1 - Jame’s Birthday

I hope you are able to provide more on this yarn. It has me intrigued so far.


Reviewer: Renee Heart Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 - 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Jame’s Birthday

Hun Great start I liked it when you cowrote with Zoe on BC/TS  on "Boys don't cry"

 

Keep up the good work


Reviewer: jamesd Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2011 - 01:02 am Title: Chapter 1 - Jame’s Birthday

Very good start. You left the story many ways to proceed.


Reviewer: Darkkitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2011 - 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Jame’s Birthday

Thank you, Ill make sure the next chapter is longer, and Ill use a wp instead of google docs :)

I meant for this chapter to be alittle short, it was more of a teaser and a test to see if I could do it 


Reviewer: Barbara Lynn Terry Anonymous starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2011 - 07:19 am Title: Chapter 1 - Jame’s Birthday

This is a cute story, but this chapter could have been longer. There are also a few grammar errors and misspeallings. You need to review this story and use a dictionary if you have to. There are famous authors that use the dictionary to make sure a word is spelled properly.


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