Date: 18 Nov 2006 - 02:12 pm Title: Prologue
Delightful tale of an eventful Hallowe'en's activities at age eight. Just the time I first became interested in wearing girls' clothes. (I was secretly inside that nightgown Colleeh's mother had loaned him even before Keith could get it over his head to return to the persona of Amanda.)
Nice attention to details and plenty of action, trivial as though it might have been, to keep your readers paying heed and enjoying.