



Date: 20 Mar 2011 - 11:54 am Title: Trick or Treat?
Very good story written very nicely and with real emotions in it. Continue it and keep comming the next parts faster then fast.




Date: 06 Mar 2011 - 12:53 pm Title: The Plan
Looks good. Wish you the best.





Date: 13 Feb 2011 - 03:29 am Title: The Plan
cool story piper, I can not wait until the next part.
yours loving
Samantha



Date: 12 Feb 2011 - 07:13 pm Title: The Plan
A very good first instalment, my curiosity is piqued as to the direction the plot will follow.
I cannot help but feel a little sad that it takes an excuse such as Halloween or any fancy dress party to allow tg people to be their true selves.
Then again it does enable them to gain confidence in the hope they can reveal the personna within.
One small step....
Date: 12 Feb 2011 - 02:38 pm Title: The Plan
Like the story, But what shoes , socks, or hosiery?




Date: 12 Feb 2011 - 02:24 pm Title: The Plan
I am most intrigued by this story. Parts of it are similar to others, regarding how a boy/girl admits to his/her best friend the "dark secret". I am now waiting to see how Aurora is viewed by her mother, as the story stated that she had always wanted and thought she had a daughter at birth.
Date: 12 Feb 2011 - 02:19 pm Title: The Plan
So far it's pretty good. Having Tracy 'help out' is really nice. However, I'm wondering why 'mom' is there and what mom's reaction will be.