Date: 09 Aug 2017 - 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Jame�s Birthday
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[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2016 - 05:21 am Title: Chapter 5 - The Trip
not even a decent discription of the unicorns , what color are, thy how big ,do they walk or prance???
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2016 - 04:47 am Title: Chapter 3 - Shopping
Still being crypticly vague ,it needs lots more description
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2016 - 04:25 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Open Door
nice start but why all the mystery ? Any ways was hoping for better discription of all involved
Date: 09 Oct 2012 - 03:08 am Title: Chapter 3 - Shopping
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[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2012 - 09:56 am Title: Chapter 1 - Jame�s Birthday
Well It's almost perfict Ashly I see thing I could have said diffrently but defently a great story :) glad to help out & ty for letting me.
Date: 12 Feb 2012 - 12:26 am Title: Chapter 1 - Jame�s Birthday
Im currently in the middle of writting the next chapter, I kinda lost my muse for this story but shes slowly comin g back to me :) I'm hoping to get this done soon :) Thank you guys for liking it :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2011 - 01:56 am Title: Chapter 3 - Shopping
Aashly,i have just finished reading allthis stories chapters i think it is agreat story,and am looking forward
to more chapters in the not so distant future
Hugs Roo
Date: 06 Nov 2011 - 07:59 am Title: Chapter 1 - Jame�s Birthday
I hope you are able to provide more on this yarn. It has me intrigued so far.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2011 - 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 4 -The Closing Ritual
Doning Great hun you & Zoe make a great pair :). I have a filling this is sort of like Becoming Robin & Aria Balde but in a diffrent setting & Things are defently diffrent but yeat similer (I really can't explain it tough its simmiler but diffrent) I wonder what was in that sack that was given to Mizule by the isterious stranger noting good I suspect.
I look fowardto the next chapter hun great work keep it up hun :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2011 - 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Jame�s Birthday
Hun Great start I liked it when you cowrote with Zoe on BC/TS on "Boys don't cry"
Keep up the good work
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2011 - 07:15 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Open Door
Interesting beginning to a story. Looking forward to the rest.
Date: 13 Feb 2011 - 10:07 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Open Door
Erm okay, you need to explain here how James became Arura. There is a gap between chapter 1 and this one. Was James an elf to begin with and only dreamed he was a human, or is hs dreaming now that heis a female el named Arura? This is a strange two chapters.
Date: 13 Feb 2011 - 05:29 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Open Door
Very cute
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2011 - 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 2 - The Open Door
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Date: 12 Feb 2011 - 01:02 am Title: Chapter 1 - Jame�s Birthday
Very good start. You left the story many ways to proceed.
Date: 11 Feb 2011 - 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Jame�s Birthday
Thank you, Ill make sure the next chapter is longer, and Ill use a wp instead of google docs :)
I meant for this chapter to be alittle short, it was more of a teaser and a test to see if I could do it
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2011 - 07:19 am Title: Chapter 1 - Jame�s Birthday
This is a cute story, but this chapter could have been longer. There are also a few grammar errors and misspeallings. You need to review this story and use a dictionary if you have to. There are famous authors that use the dictionary to make sure a word is spelled properly.