




Date: 19 Aug 2015 - 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed it and how you built the tension





Date: 19 Aug 2015 - 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
very nicely written
Stephen J





Date: 06 Feb 2012 - 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Not a bad story for starters & I would like more of this story.