




Date: 04 Nov 2009 - 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 4
"karra99" This author wrote a great story with a slightly different twist that I find refreshing and exciting. I hope this story continues to grow into a book. I think this writer has the makings to become a well sot after published and marketed author in Si-Fi/ParaNormal section. Please forgive my grammer errors that is getting worse for a while do to medical resons and that is the only reason I do not write for a living. This is a rare moment I have never wrote a review before and seldom write at all but this story deserves it.

Date: 28 Aug 2009 - 10:59 am Title: Chapter 4
The end of what ?????? The inroduction ?? This story is good only as a start , otherwise , it is crap as a stand alone piece .