




Date: 20 Aug 2015 - 12:29 am Title: Chapter 2
such a good understanding of how it feels from a guys point of view



Date: 30 Jan 2009 - 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
Short but good chapter. I can't wait for more!
P/kaf
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Date: 23 Jan 2009 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like the way the story is written and the way the plot is heading so far. Just before Jack comes on the ice, it appears a part is missing.....maybe it was cut off in the posting?..