Reviewer: maggiethekitten Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2009 - 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow ... this is the real world.  So many have walked the path that this one has and tragically ended up dead.

 We are so alone and its so damn frusterating seeing a world of girls and women born in the right bodies taking for granted the simplest pleasures and prividledges of being female.  Of course they have to take them for granted, the only way they could know how fortunate they were would for them to be like us and I wouldn't wish that on anyone.

 You captured the aloneness, the desperation and the desire for the pain to please just stop.

thank you for bearing your soul

hugs Maggie O'Malley

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Reviewer: Jayme Ann Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2008 - 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow... For this being just a story, I find myself returning to it time and time again. Thank you for posting this story for everyone to read

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