Rick Bruce
Zephyrus: As an anime fan I just happened to see the Neon Genesis title and gave it a read. This is great writing! Well done! The tempo was great, especially as it got to the sex scene and the content is very imaginative. It reminds me of a short I wrote with similar features, but this anime fantasy is more detailed and with more imaginative and deep psychological elements. You could really feel the passion of the author for the subject, and the fantasy, and the desire of it. I like that the story is not afraid to put an animation into the real world experience. The writing is great in my opinion (Herbert and Asimov fan here), and this fantasy story worthy. Good show, cheers to you, and may you receive your heart’s desire. - Rick Bruce Futuristicwave.com