Date: 16 Jul 2010 - 12:50 am Title: Chapter 11
I wish that I could just jump to the next page-this story is just so intense! I look forward to the next chapter with great enthusiasm!
I really need to stop reading so many wonderful serial stories-I get SO frustrated! Okay, I LOVE these! I can be patient, I can be patient...





Date: 26 Jun 2010 - 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
How many of us wish this would have happened as we were young andgrowing up. Great begining of a story to relate too





Date: 20 Jun 2010 - 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter good to know tha David won't be bothering anymore. Now Mary-Beth has a big problem





Date: 11 Jun 2010 - 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Good by crule world.
That no good egotistal jar head ass hole. I hope he wakes up with that note & figure out what he did was wrong. If I was matila's mother 1. File for devorce 2. File child abuse charges aginst him 3. Move with all the kids to the mountins with no fowarding address.





Date: 04 Jun 2010 - 04:26 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh, please do more soon! I am so into this story! It's great!





Date: 04 Jun 2010 - 04:23 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this story! Please add more soon!
Date: 10 May 2010 - 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
when are you going to give us an update on this story? Enquiring minds want to know what happens next.





Date: 22 Dec 2009 - 10:47 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved your story. I can't wait till the next installment of this story





Date: 07 Aug 2009 - 10:08 am Title: Chapter 8
Date: 05 Jun 2009 - 12:47 am Title: Chapter 1
ty ,a very nice story,to bad we all couldn't have such a understanding mother
kimmie