Anonymous · 16 Jul 2010 - 12:50 am · Chapter 11 [Report This]
I wish that I could just jump to the next page-this story is just so intense! I look forward to the next chapter with great enthusiasm!
I really need to stop reading so many wonderful serial stories-I get SO frustrated! Okay, I LOVE these! I can be patient, I can be patient...
Anonymous · 26 Jun 2010 - 03:57 pm · Chapter 1 [Report This]
How many of us wish this would have happened as we were young andgrowing up. Great begining of a story to relate too
Signed · 20 Jun 2010 - 02:00 pm · Chapter 10 [Report This]
Great chapter good to know tha David won't be bothering anymore. Now Mary-Beth has a big problem
Anonymous · 11 Jun 2010 - 07:18 pm · Chapter 9 - Good by crule world. [Report This]
That no good egotistal jar head ass hole. I hope he wakes up with that note & figure out what he did was wrong. If I was matila's mother 1. File for devorce 2. File child abuse charges aginst him 3. Move with all the kids to the mountins with no fowarding address.
Anonymous · 04 Jun 2010 - 04:26 am · Chapter 8 [Report This]
Oh, please do more soon! I am so into this story! It's great!
Anonymous · 04 Jun 2010 - 04:23 am · Chapter 1 [Report This]
I love this story! Please add more soon!
Anonymous · 10 May 2010 - 02:24 pm · Chapter 1 [Report This]
when are you going to give us an update on this story? Enquiring minds want to know what happens next.
Anonymous · 22 Dec 2009 - 10:47 am · Chapter 1 [Report This]
I loved your story. I can't wait till the next installment of this story
Anonymous · 07 Aug 2009 - 10:08 am · Chapter 8 [Report This]
I really liked you story Raised in SLC. I was wondering if you are going to keep writing more of it. Thank you for letting me read it.
Have a great day.
Becky
Anonymous · 05 Jun 2009 - 12:47 am · Chapter 1 [Report This]
ty ,a very nice story,to bad we all couldn't have such a understanding mother
kimmie
Signed · 04 Apr 2009 - 09:47 am · Chapter 4 [Report This]
An excellent story continues. Please don't keep us waiting.
Anonymous · 11 Mar 2009 - 07:47 pm · Chapter 1 [Report This]
Penny,
No doubt, you were raised in SLC. Liberty Park, Mormon doctrine, and intelligent writing. Chapter 2 did not disappoint. After a 40 year hiatis, I'm back in Utah. Raised in Murray, now living in Woods Cross. Please keep the chapters coming.
Huggs
Linda
Anonymous · 02 Mar 2009 - 11:13 pm · Chapter 1 [Report This]
Having been raised in SLC, I am eagerly awaiting the follwing chapters. Just wish I had a younger sister who coud have kept my secret instead of devising ways to torture me with it. And an understanding mom would have been icing on the cake.
Author's Response: Linda,
So good to hear from you. Glad you're enjoying Raised in SLC. Do you still live in the area? I hope I don't disapoint you with my little tale. Perhaps I'll have to post the next chapter a little sooner, rather than later.
Huggs & Giggles
Penny
Anonymous · 28 Feb 2009 - 12:47 pm · Chapter 1 [Report This]
Penny do you have others posted elsewhere hope so
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Author's Response: Kimmie,
Hi, thanks for reading and for leaving a review. Raised in SLC is a book I wrote a couple of years back. It consists of 15 chapters, all of which I'll be posting here. One per week, if it isn't too long to wait between chapters, hee hee :-).
Huggs & Giggles
Penny
Anonymous · 28 Feb 2009 - 12:37 pm · Chapter 1 [Report This]
Thank what a wonderful story ,hope to see more
hugs
kimmie