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Reviewer: Duncan Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2010 - 09:03 am Title: Chapter 1

Hi,

I very much like where you are going with this story and cant wait to see what happens to Eugene and his friends next. I will be watching out for updates.

Great Job!!

Duncan

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Reviewer: marajaqwin Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2009 - 03:20 am Title: Chapter 4

your chapters are way too short. instead of chapter breaks try white space instead.

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