[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2009 - 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 4
"karra99" This author wrote a great story with a slightly different twist that I find refreshing and exciting. I hope this story continues to grow into a book. I think this writer has the makings to become a well sot after published and marketed author in Si-Fi/ParaNormal section. Please forgive my grammer errors that is getting worse for a while do to medical resons and that is the only reason I do not write for a living. This is a rare moment I have never wrote a review before and seldom write at all but this story deserves it.
Date: 26 Sep 2009 - 09:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Too short. You need about 5 times more content that you have provided today. Unless you plan to write 5 chapters a day.
nobody.
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2009 - 10:59 am Title: Chapter 4
The end of what ?????? The inroduction ?? This story is good only as a start , otherwise , it is crap as a stand alone piece .
Date: 10 Jul 2009 - 09:53 am Title: Chapter 3
So... SHORT! GAH! I've been waiting over a month for the next chapter of this, and all we get is a short little teaser? You're evil, you are :P
But seriously, so far I really like this story. I hope you can post a little faster from now on, not that I can complain myself without sounding like a hipocrite, but each chapter seems to draw me in, and then when it's over I want the next one already and... it isn't there. PLEEEASE?
Melanie E.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2009 - 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
needs more
Author's Response:
Done and done :D
And there's plenty more where that came from. Just gotta be able to take a break from work, spouse, kids, bills, and life in general long enough to type it all...
Date: 15 Mar 2009 - 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Chapter 2 I do not belive is the end. "The End... Maybe?" is tacked on to the last posted chapter of every story marked as "incomplete" in the posting software. "The End" is taked on to any story marked "Complete". It's a part of the software we use here @ TGFiction.Net.
-HuGgLeS-
-P/KAF
Date: 14 Mar 2009 - 11:44 am Title: Chapter 2
I really like this story. The characters are interesting, and it looks like there's quite an adventure ahead for them!
I'm looking forwards to the next chapters.
Melanie E.
Date: 13 Mar 2009 - 01:34 am Title: Chapter 2
Why the end? Actually, I'd like to see him reject the power and find himself changing anyway - if the Lord regent is correct - and see how an unwilling Celeste handles things, number one being the feeling of being lied to by Narissa. That would certainly be the road less traveled.
Date: 17 Feb 2009 - 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
interesting start. Looking forward to more
Date: 04 Feb 2009 - 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh...
My...
WONderful start! I cannot, well,,, guess I'll have to won't I... wait for more... please more...
Hugs,
Jess