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Dreammaker
New Stories!!, I enjoyed your stories on Crystal's Story Site. Both of these stories look like fun, thou I think I will enjou this one just a bit more.
Reviews For Sk8ter Boi
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Linda Jeffries
Good story.
Doesn't your English teachr believe in quotation marks around dialog? Try it; it makes reading a bit easier.
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Kirstyn Amanda Fox
interesting story premise. I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment.
I wonder if it was REALLY the rink that changed the order, or if the girls thought this up ahead of time... Since the nametag had already said Bobbie and all...
My only issue with this story is that it could use a bit of editing, and proper punctuation and such.
But a good story none the less.
-HuGgLeS-
-P/KAF
I wonder if it was REALLY the rink that changed the order, or if the girls thought this up ahead of time... Since the nametag had already said Bobbie and all...
My only issue with this story is that it could use a bit of editing, and proper punctuation and such.
But a good story none the less.
-HuGgLeS-
-P/KAF