Karen
It's not often that I come across a story that is well written, AND is about a boy and girl who are best friends. I can almost feel the coming tension, and a twist or two? I hope it's not, too, long before the next installment.
Hugs, Karen
Barbara
I like this story. It is filled with surprises one after the other, and that makes it great to read. I basically like what happened to Keith's ... erm, Amanda's first costume, and s/he had to wear the fairy costume. That is so precious. Then every house they went to Keith/Amanda was give one compliment after another, and that would be very nice; for a girl. So Ireallyliked readin this. Thank you for sharing.
Barbara
Annette
Author's Response:
But that would be telling! I really do have 2 almost finished chapters of this story. I'm just trying to find that one bit that's "off" somewhere that's causing them to not 'click' with the rest. I promise you, that this year will see those 2 chapters, and the ones that follow them. I have a loving story planned out, and just need to add "the details".
-HuGgLeS-
Piper
Leah
Delightful tale of an eventful Hallowe'en's activities at age eight. Just the time I first became interested in wearing girls' clothes. (I was secretly inside that nightgown Colleeh's mother had loaned him even before Keith could get it over his head to return to the persona of Amanda.)
Nice attention to details and plenty of action, trivial as though it might have been, to keep your readers paying heed and enjoying.

