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thruholewizard
I really loved it .I loved the happy ending .I would love to see you write more like this . Watch your grammar and spelling .
Stephen J
Reviews For When Beth Helped Part 1
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thruholewizard
I really loved it .I loved the happy ending .I would love to see you write more like this . Watch your grammar and spelling .
Stephen J
Stephen J
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Maryjane
I really didn't expect this type of an ending, it makes me think this wasn't just a story, but a real life experience.
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Renee Heart
Great story Figured when Jess started flerting & the way Betha acted around Jess I fugured that Beth finaly figured out that she was a Lesbian & loved Jess WAY more that James & the way James always felt more comftorable as Jess & after the first time she was dressed fully as a girl how her manerisms changer like a switch & instantly became a girl voice & all that the longer Jess was aroud James was loosing moe & more ground then she relized that she WANTED to be Jess for the rest of her life.
Love this story Love to see how Jess & Beth get along & how School treats Jess latter when she starts going to school as Jess
(I'm not familure with UK school system is sith form the highest grade there is before college?)