




Date: 09 Aug 2015 - 08:24 am Title: Chapter 1
I would love to see more to this story ..I found it very erotic
Stephen J





Date: 04 Nov 2014 - 04:02 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved the story and would love to see more like this .
Stephen J




Date: 23 Sep 2014 - 11:51 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved the story .The fact that English is not your first language ,though apparent ,did not detract from the story .I loved the idea of telling the story through the diary ,very clever.I hope you continue to write ,your second story was a good read as well...keep writing !