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Penname: Annette [Contact] Real name: Annette
Member Since: 05 Feb 2008
Membership status: Member
Bio:
I'm a new author, and sadly not all that good.  Hopefully by writing more, and incorporating helpful comments, I'll advance to at least the medocre level.
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To Friends by Cat Lochley Rated: Younger Audiences (Age 5+) (K) starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 98]
Summary: Dennis is a mischevious schoolboy until one mistake turns his world upside down

Latest Chapter:
Table of Contents:
  1. Part 1 - New Friends - [Reviews - 96] - (4822 words)
  2. Part 2 - Lessons learned - [Reviews - 3] - (5792 words)

Categories: Fiction
Characters: None
Age Group: Pre-Teen Under 13
Categories: Sweet and Sentimental
Genre: None
Keywords: Diapers or Little Girls, School Girl
Story Universe: None
Series: To Friends
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10614 Read Count: 26790 ePub Downloads: 3383
[ Download ePub ] [Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2007 Updated: 14 Aug 2007
Reviewer: Annette Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1 - New Friends

Intresting story.  It's really too bad that the two girls were not willing to REALLY remain friends with Dennis once Donna was gone...  Seems they are not as open minded as they might think.  Are Dennis and Donna different people?  Once Dennis learned his lessons, did he remain a prankster as Dennis?  It didn't SOUND like it... So why the reaction - other than cultural brainwashing.

Reviewer: Annette Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Part 2 - Lessons learned

Hmmm.  Interesting. A little surprising that "Donna's" little birth defect didn't get found out during the week...  But, people see what they expect.

I think the story could have been more impactful, or immediate with more dialog... but it would have been much longer then.

That Dad comforted mom while child sleeping was interesting.

Thanks,
Annette

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