Date: 04 May 2009 - 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 5: A rude awakening and new introductions....
I cann't wait to read the next chapters.
Date: 16 Apr 2009 - 03:30 am Title: Chapter 5: A rude awakening and new introductions....
Cruel to end this unfinished just when those of us tired of serials thought we were finally getting a complete story.
its not finished yet infact there is still a few chapters to go since its quite long I just want to finish all of it off before i post anymore sorry to keep you waitin it might take a while though
theres still a lot to cover and I don't intend on finishing it now!!!
Date: 14 Apr 2009 - 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 5: A rude awakening and new introductions....
good so far I like the characters and the manner of the change although i think you'll need to mention how Brent and the others are getting on in one of the next chapters keep it up though!
i'll keep that in mind thank you :)
Date: 13 Apr 2009 - 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 2: What's wrong with you dude?
A really interesting start to the story. keep it up!
thank you I hope you feel the new chapters are as good as the previous