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Reviewer: stienbeck Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 - 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 7

Oh boy! what a cracking tale,left wide open for lots more fun and mishappenchance,I love it.XXXXX F.

Reviewer: Denise Em Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2009 - 11:13 am Title: Chapter 7

> The End...Maybe?


Oh, I sincerely hope not.  Surely, there has to be a greater story of the aftermath.

All in your own good time, of course.  :)


with warm regard,






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Reviewer: Jezzi Belle Stewart Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2009 - 02:46 am Title: Chapter 7


I would like to see this continue.  From Chapter 6 we learn that Emily is taking pleasure in seeing Brian Feminized and wants it to continue.  

**  “I know but what can we do, run away?” Emily replied. She expressed sympathy to Brian but was secretly enjoying his discomfort and the additional layers of femininithat
were being applied.  **

I wonder if that will continue now that he has proved to be the hero. And also from what was written, I'm not sure she would if it became aparant that "she" was starting to like it. I'm not sure if Julie likes Eric's feminization and wants to see it continued or not. (I hope so.  I hope the two girls are not done with Erica and Brianna yet. ... And I hope both do eventually come to like being gurls, even if only part time. )


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