Date: 26 Sep 2009 - 09:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Too short. You need about 5 times more content that you have provided today. Unless you plan to write 5 chapters a day.
nobody.
Date: 15 Mar 2009 - 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Chapter 2 I do not belive is the end. "The End... Maybe?" is tacked on to the last posted chapter of every story marked as "incomplete" in the posting software. "The End" is taked on to any story marked "Complete". It's a part of the software we use here @ TGFiction.Net.
-HuGgLeS-
-P/KAF
Date: 17 Feb 2009 - 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
interesting start. Looking forward to more
Date: 04 Feb 2009 - 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh...
My...
WONderful start! I cannot, well,,, guess I'll have to won't I... wait for more... please more...
Hugs,
Jess