[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2016 - 04:04 am Title: An imaginative victory
come on . how long do we have to wait for the rest of the story ???
I have read and re read the story so far and it is a great start so please POST SOME MORE .
Stephen J
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2016 - 04:26 am Title: A look back..
thanks for the background on Eli and at least descriptions of his friends it helps me imagine who he is much better ...
Stephen J
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2016 - 04:15 am Title: Dropped on my bottom
slow start could be more descriptive ,hope we learn more about Eli and what could have precipatated him finding himself in a new body
sjhallahan
rereading because it was so good first time
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2016 - 10:25 pm Title: A brief history of magic
I would rate it higher if I could
Stephen J
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2016 - 07:37 am Title: An imaginative victory
Please write more I was so enjoying the read .the story has such a good start I do hope you write more
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2016 - 03:29 am Title: A brief history of magic
I have been enjoying the story far too much to be overly critical.I suppose you could spend more time on being descriptive ,though it has been ok so far it could be better
Date: 28 Jun 2015 - 09:26 am Title: An imaginative victory
You keep on begging for reviews so I have registered a profile just for you. I love it after discovering this website the other day this is my favourite stroy so far, cant wait for more. You ask for favourate character and sugestions, maybe more Arya becaus there has been relatively little of her so far and I like blondes, or fantasizing about being one;)