[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2010 - 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Outstanding author. I hope to see a lot more work by this person. The story has the smooth flow of very outstanding writing.
Date: 29 Nov 2008 - 05:47 am Title: Chapter 17
Ah Shoot!
I can understanf the last 2 chapters but IMHO it would be a better ending with Toni's prediction of a 1-2 finish at Indy being the end. Or even adding another couple chapters with Toni marrying the 2 'other' women as well.
Date: 01 Feb 2008 - 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Toni, Great story of transformation. I hope you kep posting
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2007 - 01:38 am Title: Chapter 1
i just loved this story when is the next part coming out
Date: 12 Sep 2007 - 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm happy to see more of this story, and sad that it's over. I was counting on at least a half-dozen more chapters, darn it.
About the MTV thing, I did think that somewhere before you ended this we would find out who tried to "out" Toni. That didn't seem to ba a casual act, it almost had to be somebody inside her circle. Otherwise, how would they know?
Thanks Toni! All in all, an enjoyable romp!
Author's Response: Actually that is the next chapter.
Date: 03 Sep 2007 - 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 12
Just finished ready the entire story up to here, and I hope to see more of this soon! Gotta say tho, the MTV thing was a little over the top. Could have skipped that part with no problems.
Author's Response: Thank you for the input. I'm glad you liked it for the most part. I put the MTV part in because I was feeling a bit jaded just having it be about racing. Don't worry, I have 2 new chapters that are in the final stages of proofing right now, and hope to have them up before the weekend is out.
Date: 17 Aug 2007 - 04:12 am Title: Chapter 1
I should let you all in on the fact that I did post this story, chapters 1-9 on Sapphire's site. However, in the past few months she hasn't replied to any of my e-mails or posted any of the new chapters, so here they are for your reading pleasure. Please feel free to drop me a line and let me know what you think of my little venture into the world of fiction.