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Reviewer: GrammarPolice Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2009 - 11:08 am Title: Chapter 6
Date: 13 Mar 2009 - 11:08 am Title: Chapter 6
Sorry, but the lack (or at least, small amount) of commas makes the story seem a little bit less professional. It's just a little bit odd, missing that punctuation...