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Reviewer: powderpuff Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 - 08:48 am Title: Chapter 3

can,t wait to see the ending.


Reviewer: powderpuff Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 - 08:43 am Title: Chapter 2

to be continued.


Reviewer: powderpuff Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 - 08:38 am Title: Chapter 1

This an 25cents will get you a cup of coffee,but here goes.

I injoyed your story,I thought it was well done,but what did mother have to say???

Yours always Powderpuff.


Reviewer: Barbara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2009 - 09:34 am Title: Chapter 1

Mother's car??? A very good ending for this, and a very good start for the next chapter. This was written very well, and the plot, dialogue, and images were very good. I amgoing to love readin the next chapter.

Barbara


Reviewer: stacy Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2009 - 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very nice Amanda. I like it. Can't hardly wait for more.


Reviewer: Kristi Fitzpatrick Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2009 - 11:37 am Title: Chapter 1

     Oh you meanie another cliffhanger!  OK you got me and probably mom is in the know, but maybe not and the poor boy has no idea of course with these conniving women.  I do really like this and all the fun a couple can have.  Do we have a latent lesbian here?  Like the story very much.

     Hugs, Kristi


Reviewer: Linda Jeffries Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2009 - 09:53 am Title: Chapter 1

Excellent story.  And, what a cliff hanger ending.  It just begs for a sequel.


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