Reviews For Kelly's Journey
Reviewer: Trish Simpson Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2009 - 08:21 am Title: Chapter 24-Surgery
Author's Response:
Date: 25 Aug 2009 - 08:21 am Title: Chapter 24-Surgery
This is a wonderful story that is very well written and laid out, but (and maybe this is just me) I find the parenthetical thoughts really distracting and disruptive to the narrative.
I realize that is a stylistic criticism and I want you to know that the story itself is very well designed and told.
Author's Response:
I do thre thoughts that way in order to show the thoughts so that I can see them, and as my style.