Reviews For Alandira�s Song
Reviewer: thruholewizard Signed 
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Date: 12 Jul 2016 - 04:25 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Open Door
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2016 - 04:25 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Open Door
nice start but why all the mystery ? Any ways was hoping for better discription of all involved
Reviewer: james Anonymous 
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Date: 18 Feb 2011 - 07:15 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Open Door
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2011 - 07:15 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Open Door
Interesting beginning to a story. Looking forward to the rest.
Reviewer: Barbara Lynn Terry Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2011 - 10:07 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Open Door
Date: 13 Feb 2011 - 10:07 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Open Door
Erm okay, you need to explain here how James became Arura. There is a gap between chapter 1 and this one. Was James an elf to begin with and only dreamed he was a human, or is hs dreaming now that heis a female el named Arura? This is a strange two chapters.
Reviewer: Stanman63 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2011 - 05:29 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Open Door
Date: 13 Feb 2011 - 05:29 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Open Door
Very cute
Reviewer: :) Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2011 - 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 2 - The Open Door
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2011 - 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 2 - The Open Door
Thank you for sharing these