[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2015 - 10:00 am Title: Chapter 1
you lose points for vocabulary. lol wish you had written more about the changes .
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2009 - 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a really nightmarish story. In the first place, Satan would not remove the wig by grabbing it he would simply make it permanent. And I agree with Leah. While most of us who are Christian can actually read with knowledge the details in the story, and what they mean, i.e., the coming of the anti-Christ.
This story is one that some so-called Christians will denounce as either pure blasphemy, or the work of a very warped mind. When I write, I tend to stay away from controversial items that may offend, unless I am giving a reiew or a comment.
This story is witten very good, and is full of drama. But, it is going to really tear at some of the so-called Christians souls.
Love & hgs,
Barbara
Date: 18 Nov 2006 - 10:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Since most of us can follow the Christian aspects behind this story, it moves right along, especially as Annette as author and as the mentor in her story cajoles us to have faith, things will turn out the way they're supposed to. (Whether they actually do/did, I'm not sure; that's eventually left up to the reader's imagination.)
I'm not so sure my imagination can deal with the purpose that may be supposed to lie behind story. In fact, even as one who is not particularly Christian, there's a big word that may apply here -especially in the minds of serious believers; here's the dictionary definition because I don't really want to use it directly: The crime of stealing or desecrating that which is sacred.
Generally I like open-ended stories, but my imagination is having a hard time wrapping itself around this one in a satisfying manner.