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Reviewer: Peta Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 - 08:39 am Title: The Beginning

Just a minor but irritating point.  Spell check makes sure A word is spelled correctly, but doesn't check usage.  Here are a couple of examples in the first two paragraphs:

"A body started to fell from the stairs,", "Hot tears started to ran down like rivers."

I should read

"A body started to fall from the stairs,", "Hot tears started to run down like rivers."

These types of errors are a distraction from the story and really should be avoided.


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