Reader note
thruholewizard
very nice story . Write some more .
TGFiction COTTAGEPUNK
Stories that take root by day and glow after dark.
cool
Sweet story . it could have been a little longer. yet it was very nice as it is .
Sweet Dreams and keep up the great work luv
Akiko Mye Kato
I stopped reading when he just gave in an accepted being Rita without a fight. I wish he had put up a fight. If he had left the house. he might have stayed a girl, but the sleep deal wouldn't have been in effect and he wouldn't get old and fat - except in the normal passage of time, and then only the old was a given.